my hands smell like cigars
and the cigar box smells like you
your fake Rolex has some tarnish
it’s charred hands no longer move
my lungs are full of tar
and white smoke fills the room
my hands smell like cigars
and the cigar box smells like you
your silver zippo lost its polish
as your fingers searched for truth
the photos all wear fake smiles
and the eyes are empty rooms
my hands smell like cigars
and the cigar box smells like you
my letter sits in folds
words unspoken split in two
my lungs are full of tar
and white smoke fills the room
you slipped through my fingers
like the smoke that filled the room
my hands smell like cigars
and the cigar box smells like you
these memories are ashes
and this cigar box is a tomb
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This is an incredibly powerful piece–that ending really got me.
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Thank you so much!!
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Someone should put music to this.
I loved the repetitions — they set a melancholy tone, they are like thoughts you can’t stop from moving in circles around your mind.
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Wow, thank you, Basilike, what a lovely compliment! Yes, it’s much like that!
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I loved this poem Angela.
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Thank you, Kat! 💜
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like it or not, everything about this sticks to you….pun intended
I love it Angela
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Thank you so much, Mark.
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Excellent!
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Thank you, VJ!
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My pleasure
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Great read, Angela, and sth new from you, if I may say.
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Thank you, Bojana!
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This is love.😊
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Yes, and some objects and smells can conjure such visceral memories! Thank you for being here and I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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Beautifully sad!
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Thank you, Holly! Sorry I missed this. 💜
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Thank you Angela, I really related to this . It”s very lovely
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I’m happy it spoke to you. Thank you!
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I love the slanted order of this. It lulls you in and then changes things at the last. This is very good. Happy Halloween Angela!
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Thank you so much, John. Happy Halloween to you as well!
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Fucking love this!
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Thank you so much, Rita! Some items hold with them such visceral memories.
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Very much so! Cigars are one of those for me – but not in a Lewinsky way 😂
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Haha!! I have a cigar box that contains a few memorable things that belonged to a loved one, and they all have a distinct smell.
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My dad smoked cigars all the time. When I smell them, sometimes I can feel his presence ❤️. We he passed, my sisters and I all sat down at a tree on the farm where we spread his ashes and smoked one. It was a 50/50 success – two of us loved it, two got really sick.
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Oh, I love that. Lol, I’d get sick I think. I don’t like the smell!!
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😊 I like them
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Wow! yes, this is amazing!
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Thank you so much, Meg!
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That is a helluva good poem.
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Thank you so much, David.
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