she was all softness and soap,
no makeup or jewelry,
skin with a polished translucence,
as if she only ever bathed in mountain streams
she smelled like one of those overpriced, crafty shops you find in small, country towns,
all sandalwood and lavender,
an easy comfort that wrapped itself around me like a well-worn sweatshirt
as I walked to her,
light seemed to whoosh through my head like a brisk breeze,
leaving behind a mesmerizing feeling of reverence,
of old books and mom-and-pop coffee shops I never wanted to leave
and when we stood so closely together,
I couldn’t see the ground below,
only the horizon,
a sheet of flattened, shiny tin that stretched as far as I could see,
stamped with the buoyant sparks of possibility
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I love your descriptive imagery in this one!
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Thank you so much! Thanks for reading.
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Uplifting. These are the line to resonated with me most. I couldn’t see the ground below,
only the horizon,
a sheet of flattened, shiny tin that stretched as far as I could see,
stamped with the buoyant sparks of possibility
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Thank you, Ali! I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!
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Lovely, Ang. Simply beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, Rita! 💜 you.
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Love you right back 😊
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I thought I’d dreamed it for a while 😂
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Lol!
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🤣
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So beautiful!
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Thank you, Holly! 💜
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