“I love you,” she says,
her voice shivering and raspy,
the unfamiliar words birthed from some damp, corroded place inside her,
flaking like rust as she forces them through tentative lips
it isn’t that she doesn’t love him –
she does;
she loves him more than she thought was possible
but,
she never wanted to need him
-image via Pixabay
Wonderful Poem 😉 Happy to go though it 😉
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Thank you very much!
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Beautiful! I also just read, Not One, and every line struck me, every word. It is so good! I wasn’t able to comment on the post itself, but I had to tell you!!!!
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Thank you, and thank you! I love that it spoke to you, Susan. I turned comments off. I’m not sure about some things so I’m trying things out to see how they fit.
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Oh soooo good, Sister ❤️
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I loved this poem…”flaking like rust!” Awesome!
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Thank you so much!💜
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Excellent point!
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Thank you!
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