they say the pines a’whisper,
a rustling lullaby song,
as the breeze plucks at treetops,
and cool nights grow dark and long
but their sound does not lull, no,
it sings harshly of a ‘bye,
disappearing in shadow,
and cruel whispering of lies
there’s no bogeyman hiding,
in the darkest nooks of night,
it’s absence that’s a’haunting,
hollow howls in the moonlight
-image found via rebloggy.com, revised older poem
Beautiful visionary walk!
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Thank you so much, Linda.
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You’re welcome, Angela!
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absence haunts more….those words are very taunt Angela.
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Thank you, Gina!
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I love the images created here, Angela. You can feel the longing and loneliness of it. Very powerful.
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Thank you, Eric! I appreciate your lovely comment. Thank you for reading!
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Very nice. I like nature, even the spookiness of it. I’ve written a poem about it too called “A Forest Called Madness,”
https://madpoetenchained.wordpress.com/2015/06/15/a-forest-called-madness-2/.
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Thank you, Sean. I will definitely take a look!
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The emptiness becomes an entity here……I like that.
This is a beautiful piece.
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Yes! Thank you so much, Mish. 💜
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Aiiyiiyyaaaaaa!! ❤️ Angela this is amazing!! 😀
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Thank you so much, Sanaa!
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It’s absence that’s a’haunting,
Hollow howls in the moonlight… beautiful!
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Thank you!! Have a lovely weekend. 💜
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You are so good at creating atmosphere Angela! These lines really got to me:
But their sound does not lull, no,
It sings harshly of a bye,
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Thank you so much, Victoria! I was thinking about how we sometimes lie in bed having trouble sleeping, listening to the wind. But its sound is only stirring, it’s no lullaby. It doesn’t lull; it perpetuates those swirling thoughts, and is a howling reminder of the byes, that which is missing, or gone, or never could be.
I appreciate the lovely feedback. Thank you, again! 💜
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Oh I do love this. Reminds of that ancient fear we carry in our hearts for what we cannot see.
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Thank you, Björn! How interesting….I will have to look that up! But it is very reminiscent of that. I was thinking of all the things about which the night reminds us, when we have trouble sleeping. Those things are often absences – lost time, lost people, etc.
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Very nice meter and rhyme and content about the absence rather than the presence of a bogeyman being haunting.
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Thank you, Frank!
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The ending echoes beyond the hollowed night ~ The second stanza is my favorite part Angela!!!
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Thank you, Grace!
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❤
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Omg!
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Lol!
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This is a really nice piece.
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Thank you, Joseph!
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Wow. Just simply….wow.
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I’m humbled, Toni. Thank you!
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