Heart Breathings

"Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart." William Wordsworth

Composition

Posted on November 29, 2017 by Heartbreathings

as the morning breeze whispers
the melody we made,
the sting and ache echo
last night’s chorus
with each movement,
replayed

the warm sheets still hum
our candlelit din,
a masterpiece composed
over willing skin

25 thoughts on “Composition”

Elle Nguyen on December 6, 2017 at 9:21 pm said:

The only word I can think to explain this poem is “soft”. Sensual is right! So beautiful, gentle.

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- Angela on December 6, 2017 at 10:08 pm said:
  
  Thank you, so much Elle. I appreciate the kind words. You have a lovely name!
  
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Poet Rummager on December 5, 2017 at 1:31 am said:

Wow! I loved your satin sheet words, Angela. 🛏❣️

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michnavs on November 30, 2017 at 9:46 am said:

So sensual…☺

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- Angela on November 30, 2017 at 8:15 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Mich.
  
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Ward Clever on November 29, 2017 at 9:33 pm said:

Lovely!

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- Angela on November 29, 2017 at 11:16 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Ward!
  
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  - Ward Clever on November 29, 2017 at 11:59 pm said:
    
    😊
    
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my valiant soul on November 29, 2017 at 2:24 pm said:

“The warm sheets still hum….” ahh this is pure love!
Breath taking verse from you my friend.

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- Angela on November 29, 2017 at 5:35 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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Rita on November 29, 2017 at 12:12 pm said:

Wonderful ❤️

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- Angela on November 29, 2017 at 5:34 pm said:
  
  Thanks, Rita. 💜
  
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cosmicpoetrynottingham on November 29, 2017 at 11:14 am said:

Love this!

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- Angela on November 29, 2017 at 5:34 pm said:
  
  Thank you, CPN.
  
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Alpesh Bhayani (Devil) on November 29, 2017 at 10:57 am said:

❤👌📝

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- Angela on November 29, 2017 at 5:34 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Alpesh. 💜
  
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Nandita on November 29, 2017 at 10:38 am said:

Sensual and magical, Angela. Beautiful!

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- Angela on November 29, 2017 at 5:33 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Nandita. 💜
  
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  - Nandita on November 30, 2017 at 3:27 am said:
    
    You’re welcome ❤
    
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House of Heart on November 29, 2017 at 10:35 am said:

Beautifully sensual Angela!

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- Angela on November 29, 2017 at 5:33 pm said:
  
  Thank you, Holly.
  
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  - House of Heart on November 29, 2017 at 6:24 pm said:
    
    a pleasure as always Angela, This is lovely! ❤
    
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    - Angela on November 29, 2017 at 6:35 pm said:
      
      🌺💕
      
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      - House of Heart on November 29, 2017 at 6:37 pm said:
        
        🌺🌹 ❤️
        
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        Angela on November 29, 2017 at 7:17 pm said:
        
        I’m heading to a poetry open mic. 🍺🌸💜
        
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