I hear my weary bones a’creaking,
the slap-flapping of valves
working overtime,
‘cuz they’re leaking
I feel the slowing tempo
of waves receding,
the acquiescence
of my spirit weeping
I hear my weary bones a’creaking,
but I can’t give in –
my soul’s still seeking
-image via Tumblr, source unknown; written as part of dVerse Poet Pub’s Quadrille prompt
That last line is a keeper! The photo is mesmerizing.
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Thank you, Beverly! I agree, it really is.
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Brava, Angela!
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Thank you, Eric, I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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Wonderful last line!
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Thank you!
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I like how the seeking keeps one going.
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Thank you, Frank!
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I love your take on the prompt..
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Thank you!
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This is such an emotional piece. Loved it..I can’t give in…
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I’m so happy you enjoyed it, thank you!
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Loved the end.. My soul is still seeking..
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I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you!
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Yes, my soul’s still seeking ~ Love your response Angela ~
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Thank you so much, Grace. I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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