Forehead against the drop-streaked glass,
Palms resting on window pane,
Foggy breath exhales ghosts of past,
As eyes echo mother earth’s rain,
And, as concave divots mark time’s pass,
With each ricochet hope is gained,
For, thunder is but a catalyst,
And lightning nature’s metamorphosis
-Image is Winter Rain, by Marta Bevacqua; written as part of dVerse Poet Pub’s meeting the bar, using the form of the ottava rima. Go check it out and jump in!
Beautifully written. Thanks for the follow. I love your imagery and flow.
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading. My pleasure, looking forward to reading.
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Love the imagery, A. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Emily. 💜
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After reading I closed my eyes and could picture myself in the shoes full of emotion and engulfed in the environment. Thank you for sharing.
Keep Smiling,
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Thank you so much, and thank you for reading! You as well. 💜
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“For, thunder is but a catalyst,
And lightning nature’s metamorphosis ”
wow. love those lines. and the visuals of this post, Angela. powerfully done.
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Thank you so much, Rose! 💜
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you’re welcome, Angela!
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“Foggy breath exhales ghosts of past” – that is a brilliant line. 🙂
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Thank you, Ward. 💜
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Great job. Ang.
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Thanks, Rita. 💜
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The drumming of the rain is echoed in the rhythm – nicely done! I love the lines:
‘Foggy breath exhales the ghosts of past,
As eyes echo mother earth’s rain’.
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Thank you, Kim! 💜
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I like the description of the forehead against the windowpane… the thunder playing music to something that feels like a depression
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Thank you, Björn.
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Nice last two lines tying thunder and lightning together as catalyst and metamorphosis.
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Thank you, Frank.
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