I shiver,
my phone’s battery on red,
as I lay, unclothed, on the bed,
waiting,
the smell of citrus permeating the sheets,
the uneven spray of the shower beats
a rhythm,
displaced water tapping the tub’s floor,
soon your steps will approach the door,
but until then,
thoughts of you occupy my mind,
can’t wait ’till we’re entwined,
two souls as one,
buzzing to the cadence of many thousand days past,
in anticipation of a future that will outlast
this moment,
the tick-ticking of the seconds,
time passing, yet love beckons
no notice
only you and I,
infinite
-artwork found via Pinterest, The Last Kiss, by Leonid Afremov; submitted as part of of the dVerse Poet Pub’s Jazz Poetry Challenge
Ah, a lyric of sweet longing…life blood of many a jazz ditty! Your poem embodies a jazz rhythm so gracefully! Great write!
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Thank you so much, Frank. 💜
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My pleasure 😇
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Well done.💙
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Thank you!
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I could hear the sound of the water and feel those moments of waiting. I remember. Smiles.
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I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading!
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I liked this phrase and the overall description of anticipation in the poem: “a future that will outlast
this moment”
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Thank you, Frank. Love is a tapestry of moments, each a choice.
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“buzzing to the cadence of many thousand days” – the best of lines!
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Thank you!
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The music of that water dropping is perfect for the anticipation
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Thank you, Björn.
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I admire the waiting, the tension, the anticipation of the lover coming soon and shivers of delight ~
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Thank you, Grace.
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Lovely anticipation ❤
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Thank you, Rita!
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A great poem too, very sensual.
I recognise the picture used. I think it is a work by the artist Leonid Afremov but I can’t be entirely sure. Nevertheless the picture seems to mach the poem perfectly.
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Oh, thank you! I found it, and his artwork is amazing!
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very beautiful words!
hello poet….
have a nice day
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Thank you, Antonio! Hello, and I wish you the same. 💜
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